Pretty good setup, and I love how the actor playing our naked friend really accentuates the… floppping floppy bits… as well as the dialogue. BUT…
Symptom : Viewer left going “That’s it?”
Diagnosis : No real payoff. Why is the guy naked? Does it have something to do with dreams? The... more >
Pretty good setup, and I love how the actor playing our naked friend really accentuates the… floppping floppy bits… as well as the dialogue. BUT…
Symptom : Viewer left going “That’s it?”
Diagnosis : No real payoff. Why is the guy naked? Does it have something to do with dreams? The connection is never made, and then to have the guys just awkwardly break at the end is total anticlimax. Comedius interruptus dude!
Treatment : Write a real ending for the skit. for instance, have one of the guys at the end go “I had that dream once. ” and the rest all go “yeah, me too” and THEN break up, acting like it was totally normal. Or have Naked Guy say “So this isn’t a dream? Oh shit!” and bolt. You get the idea.
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Pretty good setup, and I love how the actor playing our naked friend really accentuates the… floppping floppy bits… as well as the dialogue. BUT…
Symptom : Viewer left going “That’s it?”
Diagnosis : No real payoff. Why is the guy naked? Does it have something to do with dreams? The... more >
(posted about 1 month ago)
blame canada
(posted 2 months ago)
Hardcore funny!
(posted 2 months ago)
Not funny.
(posted 8 months ago)