Four more positive notes:

> When you first meet the doctor and say,
"I don't like that,"
I guffawed out loud and
snot actually flew out of my nose.

> His mustache is hilariously distracting throughout.

> When she asks hin if it's fake is also really hilarious.
Did she ad-lib that line?

> When you rub the sandwich on your forehead, specifically, at the e... more >

Four more positive notes:

> When you first meet the doctor and say,
"I don't like that,"
I guffawed out loud and
snot actually flew out of my nose.

> His mustache is hilariously distracting throughout.

> When she asks hin if it's fake is also really hilarious.
Did she ad-lib that line?

> When you rub the sandwich on your forehead, specifically, at the end
(if it actually WAS her vulva, what would be the point of doing that?)
is another priceless random moment.

Very "Tim and Eric," whom I consider to be the current
kings of awkward movements.

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My only criticisms
(even though you didn't ask for them, I realize)
are that the editing of the dialogue in the middle section
could be tightened up just a tad,

and you have to stop giving in to
looking like you have the urge to laugh.

Otherwise,
Again, excellent work.

BR...'09..
aka tDm.©