Old Spider-man

Your real problem is your pacing. All your premises are funny but you pace it way too slow. If you recut this faster and pile the bits on top of each other it would be funnier. The Sinatra bit is pretty funny and so left field you should give “Frank” more screentime in the recut. The payoff with him webbing the couch is good but it falls flat because of the ... more >

Your real problem is your pacing. All your premises are funny but you pace it way too slow. If you recut this faster and pile the bits on top of each other it would be funnier. The Sinatra bit is pretty funny and so left field you should give “Frank” more screentime in the recut. The payoff with him webbing the couch is good but it falls flat because of the rest of the pieces poor pacing.