MegaWordMan

Wow, you left really detailed messages on several of our videos. I was unaware internet attention spans lasted that long.

As far a Sup... more »

Wow, you left really detailed messages on several of our videos. I was unaware internet attention spans lasted that long.

As far a Sup Bra goes... Can I just say I wanted to spend all day shooting a sketch where the joke was me holding breasts?

Big Love,
Erik Mann
[BGH Comedy]

Hmmm. Well, good on ya for going the less-obvious route. You think it's... more »

Hmmm. Well, good on ya for going the less-obvious route. You think it's going to be X, but it's really Y! I see what you did there! But I don't find the result to be actually funny. Just kind of unpleasant. So, meh.

Meh. Started out great with the four teens and the BONER guy, but the... more »

Meh. Started out great with the four teens and the BONER guy, but the minute the actual Willy Wonka part started, it pretty much went right into the crapper. Yes, it's great to see Christopher Lloyd be all creepy and scary, but there's not enough of the original movie to make the Wonka bit a parody. Too much Saw, not enough Wonka. Lame.

Let me be the first to say... I WISH THIS WAS GOING TO BE A REAL MOVIE.

Did... more »

Let me be the first to say... I WISH THIS WAS GOING TO BE A REAL MOVIE.

Did Al play the sleazy record company guy? "This guy's got the goods"?

Technically, not actually that funny, but so well done and expressive that... more »

Technically, not actually that funny, but so well done and expressive that I can't help but give it the thumbs up anyhow.

And I've never ever seen The Wrestler.

Sometimes, I wish this site was "Funny, Die, or Meh".

A pretty good premise... more »

Sometimes, I wish this site was "Funny, Die, or Meh".

A pretty good premise and good acting, but the material was very weak and unfocused. Was this improv? It seemed like improv. If it wasn't improv then... uh... ouch.

You should take the good bits from here, turn them into a short script, practice it a few times so you can deliver it more smoothly, then do it again. You have an awesome voice and a great look, this piece could really work, it just needs some polish.