ComedyDiagnosis

Pretty funny stuff, Ben! You need to practice more, though, I think.... more »

Pretty funny stuff, Ben! You need to practice more, though, I think. Practice lets you learn the jokes like actors learn their lines, so that you, like actors, can concentrate on how you’re saying it, not what you’re saying. Your delivery needs work.

Well, that was considerably pointless.

No jokes, a weak parody… ick.

Well, that was considerably pointless.

No jokes, a weak parody… ick.

Cute egg pasties, tho.

Skinny guy : pretty funny delivery, good pacing and timing, material is a... more »

Skinny guy : pretty funny delivery, good pacing and timing, material is a little weak but good prescence.

hefty guy : You really need to have everything wirrten out beforehand and then work to the script. Your delivery is staggered and understated, and well, the material wasn’t that great either.

Not bad, folks. Could tighten up that editing some, those extra seconds to... more »

Not bad, folks. Could tighten up that editing some, those extra seconds to mug for the camera really slow things down. Great music and great acting, though. :)