I'm a developing satire writer (also new to this site) and I would really appreciate opinions from a seasoned comedy crowd (properly flattered) on a recent short piece: "Would you make a good Angel -OF DEATH?" most of it is in the form of a questionaire. Here's a sample question and multi-choice answers:
Have you ever struck another person with intent to harm?
1. No, of course not! I don’t like these questions. Where’s the link to Icanhascheezeburger?
2. Nightly; shooting, stabbing, tire-ironing, running over hookers -GrandTheftAuto counts, right?
3. Only children. I am a nanny.
4. Only minorities. I am a policeman.
That gives you a decent idea of the flavor. It would probably be abusive to put the whole thing here, so I'll just provide a link. Please let loose with all the constructive criticism you have. (if this is the wrong way (or page) for me for me to do this please let me know. I will send appologies via hooker-gram; it's like a telegram, but waaay more satisfying)